Оценку не ставлю, но начало туповатое. ГГ пробило на чаёк и думать ГГ пока не в может. Потом запой. Идет тупой набор звуков и действий. То что у нормального человека на анализ обстановки тратится секунды или на минуты, тут полный ноль. ГГ только понял, что он обрезанный еврей. Дальше идет пустой трёп. ГГ всего боится и это основная тема. ГГ признал в себе опального и застреленного писателя, позже оправданного. В основном идёт
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in and refreshed my face. Oh yeah…
"Amy, how you feel today?" – I asked.
"A Little bit tired" – she answered.
"Ok… ok" – I said.
I went out and asked the towel. Amy found one for me. Good…
"Our dinner was good. Tasty and hearty" – I said.
"Yeah… good cafe" – she said.
We were ready to get into the bed. Awesome. I laid down and Amy too. But who turned off the light? I did it. Amy rolled into the bed for a while. But it's ok. I could understand it.
"Give me a hug" – she said.
"Ok… ok. Have a nice dream" – I said.
"Good Night" – she said.
Morning… I woke up first. I went to the bathroom. Yeah… time to woke up Amy…
After some minutes… Amy woke up. Ok.
"How was the night?" – I asked.
"Slept deeply" – she answered.
"You want go to eat something?" – I asked.
"Yes, we can go" – she answered.
We visited one more good cafe, which Amy knew. Tasty food, good mood. I always say like this. Time to back home. Amy took motorbike taxi, and I sent a kiss to her. She was shy. Ok… ok. No problem.
I went back to my room. Damn… what a good feeling? The first thought I had? Yeah… take shower. You know it. A little bit cold shower. Always good for health. Amy far away.
I opened my laptop and checked the money balance. Time to withdraw some cash. I went to the ATM. Oh shit… got some cash. And what else? Of course… need to buy some water. I was coming back home not so fast… why? You ask? I should make one phone call…
Beeps…
"Hello" – Tim answered.
"Hey… hey, how are you doing?" – I asked.
"Oh… 'J'. Good, good. And you?" – he answered.
"Awesome, Tim. Awesome" – I said.
"How was the last night?" – he asked.
"You ask how? I met Amy" – I answered.
"Do you know something about Amy?" – he asked.
"What exactly?" – I answered.
"She is a model" – he said.
"Oh… yes, she looks very attractive" – I said.
"Ok… ok. Just let you know" – he said.
"I got it" – I said.
"Take care yourself" – he said.
"Sure… you too. See you" – I said.
"See you, Bye" – he said.
"Bye" – I said.
I hung up the phone. Damn… I suspected something similar. No problem. I say like this. Ok… ok. Why don't I buy some fruits? Pineapple and watermelon. Same always. I speak! I found the place, where can buy these fruits. Ok! I bought some.
I went back to my room. I made a drink for myself and went out to the balcony. Such a good day. Good day, good mood. We must understand it. My drink and me. And balcony? Just me! Ok… ok! I had a thought… Maybe, I'm in love? Everything is possible.
Night… I'm calling Amy…
"Hello" – Amy answered.
"Hello, it's me. How are you?" – I asked.
"Fine. And you?" – she answered.
"Good… good. What are you going to do tonight?" – I asked.
"Working" – she answered.
"Ok… ok. Just asked" – I said.
"And you?" – she asked.
"Stay home" – I answered.
"Ok. Call later" – she said.
"Sure" – I said.
I hung up the phone. Amy. I thought about her. Maybe, I found somebody interesting for me. My mind was filled of her. I decided to ask myself. Do I go to see her tonight? Do I go to see her next day? Yes, I want this. See her tonight, see her next day! And sleep together.
This is my story.
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